Use collaboration techniques to correct written documents. Instructions Show your ability to analyze correct and revise the following rough

Use collaboration techniques to correct written documents.
Instructions
Show your ability to analyze, correct, and revise the following rough draft attached, giving your input on the revision necessary to improve the quality of this essay. You will show successful completion of this deliverable by
Providing feedback for corrections/alterations using the Comments feature in Word (Review tab).
Respond to the six questions at the end of the student rough draft linked above.
Use complete sentences in all of your responses.